do you prefer the mountains or the beach?
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer the beach more becase there is water in the beach and if I see the water I feel relexed.
Also we can see lot of brids.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
It\'s all about balance.
Be careful of your sentences.
The statements are very expressive.
I also agree with your point.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I prefer the beach more becase there is water in the beach and if I see the water I feel relexed.
>> I prefer the beach more because there is water in the beach and if I see the water, I feel relaxed.
Also we can see lot of brids.
Also we can see lot of brids.
>> We can also see a lot of birds.
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