Do you prefer the sunset or the sunrise, and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
i prefer sunset than sunrise. there are two reason.
the first, in order to looking sunset, i should early wake up.
and i can feel early start today than someone. so i can feel \"today is long.\"
the second, i don\'t like dark. when i meet darkness, i feel depressed.
after sunrise, will became darkness and night.
specially i hate sunrise in sunday.
because i shoiuld go work next day.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I totally understand your point. Sunrises are symbols of a new day, so seeing the sunrise makes you feel that another day has already begun and that you have a lot of things to do. I actually feel the same way, but because of my job, I have no choice but to wake up really early.
- T. Caitlyn
i prefer sunset than sunrise.
>> I prefer sunsets to sunrises.
there are two reason.
>> There are two reasons.
the first, in order to looking sunset, i should early wake up.
the first, in order to looking sunset, i should early wake up.
>> First, in order to see the sunset, I have to wake up early.
and i can feel early start today than someone. so i can feel \"today is long.\"
and i can feel early start today than someone. so i can feel \"today is long.\"
>> And I feel like I start the day earlier than others.
the second, i don\'t like dark.
>> Second, I don’t like the dark.
when i meet darkness, i feel depressed.
>> When it gets dark, I feel depressed.
after sunrise, will became darkness and night.
after sunrise, will became darkness and night.
>> After sunset, it becomes dark and night follows.
specially i hate sunrise in sunday.
specially i hate sunrise in sunday.
>> Especially, I hate sunrises on Sundays.
because i shoiuld go work next day.
because i shoiuld go work next day.
>> Because I have to go to work the next day.
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