Do you prefer to go shopping or just browse? Why? 20220606 homework
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TOPIC: Do you prefer to go shopping or just browse?Why?
There are two ways to buy things. The first way is to go shopping like going to a department store or going to a mall. The second way is to just browse by the internet. I think going shopping is a good way to buy things.Thats because of two reasons.
First, if we just go shopping, we can get things earlier than buying thing online. For example, if we are out of snacks, but we\'re going a field trip tomorrow, we need snacks. If we buy snacks online, it can take a day, but if we go shopping, we can get snacks in an hour.
Second, we can use cash if we go shopping. But in online shopping, we can\'t use cash, and should only use a credit card. So if we forgot a lost a wallet, we can use cash and go shopping. Also, if kids need to buy things, kids do not have a credit card.
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There are two ways to buy things.
>> Correct!
The first way is to go shopping like going to a department store or going to a mall.
>> Correct!
The second way is to just browse by the internet.
>> Correct!
I think going shopping is a good way to buy things.
>> Correct!
Thats because of two reasons.
>> That\'s because of two reasons.
First, if we just go shopping, we can get things earlier than buying thing online.
First, if we just go shopping, we can get things earlier than buying thing online.
>> Correct!
For example, if we are out of snacks, but we\'re going a field trip tomorrow, we need snacks.
>> Correct!
If we buy snacks online, it can take a day, but if we go shopping, we can get snacks in an hour.
>> Correct!
Second, we can use cash if we go shopping.
Second, we can use cash if we go shopping.
>> Correct!
But in online shopping, we can\'t use cash, and should only use a credit card.
>> Correct!
So if we forgot a lost a wallet, we can use cash and go shopping.
>> Correct! OR So if we don\'t have a credit card, we can use cash and go shopping.
Also, if kids need to buy things, kids do not have a credit card.
>> Correct!
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