Do you prefer to have many friends or just a few close ones?
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I used to think that having many friends is better than having a few friends. However, the more I am old, the more I prefer to have a few friends. First, I don\'t have much time to meet my friends since I get a job. It is not easy to share our story. So naturally, I become to meet a few friends. Also, small number of people is easy to make a promise and appointment.
Finally, I can talk to a few close friends about serious things and deep stories.
That\'s why I prefer to have a few friends.
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I used to think that having many friends is better than having a few friends. However, the more I am old, the more I prefer to have a few friends.
>>> I used to think that having many friends is better than having a few friends. However, as I get older, I prefer to have a few friends.
First, I don\'t have much time to meet my friends since I get a job. It is not easy to share our story.
>>> CORRECT
So naturally, I become to meet a few friends.
>>> So naturally, I just meet my few friends.
Also, small number of people is easy to make a promise and appointment.
>>> Also, a small number of people are easy to make a promise and an appointment.
Finally, I can talk to a few close friends about serious things and deep stories.
Finally, I can talk to a few close friends about serious things and deep stories.
>>> CORRECT
That\'s why I prefer to have a few friends.
That\'s why I prefer to have a few friends.
>>> CORRECT
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