Do you prefer to have many friends or just a few that you are close to? Why?

2015-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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There is an old saying that even having one close friend who understands, trusts and supports you always regardless of whatever happens will be a great thing and you are the richest man in the world, although you are not actually a man of wealth. It couldn’t be better to have many real friends who will be staying besides you forever, even if you are broke or criticized by others. Even if all the other people in the world turn their back on you, you need a friend who will still believe you. In reality, we tend to claim or behave to be close to our friends when needed. If there is nothing we can gain from our friends, we are willing to leave or betray them not to lose anything. Our friendship is so shallow that it could be extremely fragile. Better is a neighbor who is near than a brother who is far away. A good and faithful friend evidences constancy. Friends who have proved faithful for decades should be cultivated further, but some look for friendship only in times of trouble.

강사 첨삭

Sir [이름]!
Hello! Yipee!

It\'s Monday again. ^^ I am so happy that I will be able to talk to you.

Well said. Your composition is really marvelous.

I totally agree with all of the things you wrote below.

It is not important how many friends you have, as long as it is a true friendship.

Some friends are only there for you during happy times, but they leave you when you are broke or in trouble.

Inspiring!

Teacher Nina


There is an old saying that even having one close friend who understands, trusts and supports you always regardless of whatever happens will be a great thing and you are the richest man in the world, although you are not actually a man of wealth.

>> correct

It couldn’t be better to have many real friends who will be staying besides you forever, even if you are broke or criticized by others.

>> correct

Even if all the other people in the world turn their back on you, you need a friend who will still believe you.

>> Even if all the other people in the world turn their back on you, you need a friend who will still believe in you.

>> OR: Even if all the other people in the world turn their back on you, you need a friend who still believes you.

In reality, we tend to claim or behave to be close to our friends when needed.

>> correct

If there is nothing we can gain from our friends, we are willing to leave or betray them not to lose anything.

>> correct

Our friendship is so shallow that it could be extremely fragile.

>> correct

Better is a neighbor who is near than a brother who is far away.

>> correct

A good and faithful friend evidences constancy.

>> correct

Friends who have proved faithful for decades should be cultivated further, but some look for friendship only in times of trouble.

>> correct

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