Do you prefer to have many friends or just a few that you are close to?

2020-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

학생이 쓴 원문

I am old and I like my friends. Not all friends are friends. I distinguish the relationship between someone I know and my best friend. Each person has personality, so there are many interesting things. Some of my close friends meet frequently and make frequent calls. I have a lot of friends, but I think it\'s good to have some close friends in mind. In my example There are a variety of golf friends, shopping friends, travel friends, and restaurant friends.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for sending your homework. Check below for corrections. Have a good day!~~T.Dee

I am old and I like my friends.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I am old like my friends.
Not all friends are friends.

>>Not all of my friends are close to me.
I distinguish the relationship between someone I know and my best friend.

>>CORRECT!
Each person has personality, so there are many interesting things.

>>Each person has a different personality so there are many interesting things about everyone.
Some of my close friends meet frequently and make frequent calls.

>>Some of my close friends meet with me frequently and make frequent calls.
I have a lot of friends, but I think it\'s good to have some close friends in mind.

>>CORRECT!
In my example There are a variety of golf friends, shopping friends, travel friends, and restaurant friends.

>>In my case, for example, I have friends I do activities with like playing golf, shopping, travelling, and dining in a restaurant.

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