do you prefer to learn for yourself from the book or do you feel teacher's help necessary?

2017-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I Prefer to learn new fields from the experts following these reasons. first, It can help me to quickly reach my aim. they informs me that what are important, it help to save the time to be fluent in that fields. second, When I face with some problem, They instructs which one is better way to solve the problems. This advantage gives partipants a [이름]imum of failure experience. Someone consider their failure valuable. I agree with their insists but by listening to failure example, I`m capable of understanding easier than others studing alone. and if I can continue to rpeating some of a mistake, I will confuse and be comlexible without ansewers. The last, I can obtain other things that is relation with that subject. When sloving some subject alone, they will focus on only onethings. but The experts is alble to explain combined other subject. by theses reason, I like to learn new fields from the experts.

강사 첨삭


Hello JM,

I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn everyday. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need.  You can do it, if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny 

 


I Prefer to learn new fields from the experts following these reasons.

>>I prefer learning new fields from experts with these following reasons.
 first, It can help me to quickly reach my aim.

>>correct
they informs me that what are important, it help to save the time to be fluent in that fields. 

>>They inform me on what is important, it helps me to save the time and to be fluent in that field. 
 second, When I face with some problem, They instructs which one is better way to solve the problems.

>>Secondly, when I face some problems, they instruct me which one is the best way to solve problems.

 This advantage gives partipants a [이름]imum of failure experience.

>>This advantage gives partipants a [이름]imum failure of experience.

Someone consider their failure valuable.

>>Some people consider their failure valuable.

I agree with their insists but by listening to failure example, I`m capable of understanding easier than others studing alone.

>>I agree with their suggestions but by listening to their failures, I`m capable of understanding it easily compared to others.

and if I can continue to rpeating some of a mistake, I will confuse and be comlexible without ansewers. 

>>And if I will repeat the same mistake, I will be confuse without any answers.
 The last, I can obtain other things that is relation with that subject.

>>And lastly, I can obtain other things related with that subject.

When sloving some subject alone, they will focus on only onethings.

>>When they are solving a subject, they will only focus on one thing.

but The experts is alble to explain combined other subject.

>>But experts will be able to explain other subjects.

by theses reason, I like to learn new fields from the experts.

>>For these reasons, I would like to learn new fields from experts.

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