Do you prefer to shop alone or with other people? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like shopping with other people. The advantage of shopping alone is that you can enjoy shopping quietly. There\'s no one else sticking their nose into it. The advantage of shopping with other people is that you can hear other people\'s opinions. It\'s fun to be together again.
강사 첨삭
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I like shopping with other people.
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The advantage of shopping alone is that you can enjoy shopping quietly.
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There\'s no one else sticking their nose into it.
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The advantage of shopping with other people is that you can hear other people\'s opinions.
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It\'s fun to be together again.
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