Do you prefer to shop alone or with other people? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to shop alone.
Because my shopping style is very slow.
I wonder always new brend and new style, goods.
When I go to shop first I read trend and buy and choice.
If someone next to me then I\'m edgy.
강사 첨삭
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I like to shop alone.
>>CORRECT!
OR>>>I like shopping alone.
Because my shopping style is very slow.
>>>It\'s because my shopping style is very slow.
I wonder always new brend and new style, goods.
>>>I always wonder on new brands and styles of goods.
When I go to shop first I read trend and buy and choice.
>>>When I go shopping, I first read the new trends then buy what like.
If someone next to me then I\'m edgy.
>>>If there someone next to me, then I\'m become edgy.
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