Do you prefer to spend your time inside or outside?(ANSWER)

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HOMEWORK:

Do you prefer to spend your time inside or outside?

Please answer in complete sentences. 

YOUR ANSWER:

I prefer to spend my time outside with my friends.
Because I\'m very fun when I\'m together with my friends.
My friends are very kind and funny.
And I often goto downtown with my friends.
I also think it\'s good to go anywhere if we go outside.
So, I prefer to spend my time outside.

CORRECTIONS:

I prefer to spend my time outside with my friends.
Because I\'m very fun when I\'m with them.
My friends are very kind and funny.
And, I often go to downtown with my friends.
I also think it\'s good to go anywhere if we go out.
So, I prefer to spend my time outside.

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