Do you prefer to spend your time inside or outside? Please answer in complete sentences.
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HOMEWORK:
Do you prefer to spend your time inside or outside?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
I prefer to spend time in outside. because when I go outside I can play soccer, play basketball, hang out with friend many thing I can do.
CORRECTIONS:
I prefer to spend my time outside. Because when I go outside I can play soccer, basketball, hang out with friends, and many other things I can do.
** Dear [이름], thanks for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J Please take note of the corrections.
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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