Do you prefer to travel alone or with others? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I love traveling with people close to me.
When I travel, I think where I go is more important than who I go with.
When I go somewhere with my friends, I can share everything I see there.
it makes my travel more diverse and enriching.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
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Traveling with close companions adds depth to the experience, while exploring destinations together enhances our shared memories. Enjoy it with the people close to you.
See you in class.
~Kelly^^
I love traveling with people close to me.
>> Correct
OR: I enjoy
traveling with close companions.
When I travel, I think where I go is more important than who I go with.
>> Correct
>> OR:While traveling, I prioritize the destination over the company.
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When I go somewhere with my friends, I can share everything I see there.
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>> OR: Exploring new
places with my friends allows me to share everything I experience there.
it makes my travel more diverse and enriching.
>> Correct
>> OR: This enriches
and diversifies my travel experience.
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