Do you prefer travelling though the countryside or the city? Why?
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To be honestly, I want to travel both of them. travelling though the countryside is which I can feel there\'s culture people and how to live in there. On the other hand, travelling though the city is which I can do peaceful stuff and tradition. But, if I can choose only one, I\'m going to do the city because of more convenient than the countryside.
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Happy Monday, Elic! May this day be beautiful and mark the beginning of a wonderful and very productive week. Don\'t let anyone interfere what you can do.
To be honestly, I want to travel both of them.
>>> To be honest, I want to travel to the countryside and a city.
travelling though the countryside is which I can feel there\'s culture people and how to live in there.
>>> When we travel to the countryside, we get to learn about a lot of cultures, the people, and their way of life.
On the other hand, travelling though the city is which I can do peaceful stuff and tradition.
>>> On the other hand, I am more comfortable traveling to a city because I can do a lot of stuff and it\'s easier for me to follow a city\'s tradition.
But, if I can choose only one, I\'m going to do the city because of more convenient than the countryside.
>>> But if I can choose only one, I\'m going to go to the city because it\'s more convenient than the countryside.
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