Do you prefer working alone or in a group?

2021-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Although I am capable of doing both, I prefer to work in a group lately. As an entry-level employee with short experience, there are many new skills to learn when working in a group. I learned sales skills to pitch ideas effectively to clients by shadowing other team members\' interactions. Also, equipping data-driven analytics skills was impossible without reviewing other team members\' reports. Additionally, I have realized that collaboration draws favorable results to clients since sharing unique ideas facilitates creativity. Indeed, there are some issues that I need to contemplate by myself. I believe working as a group is critical to outpace others within the fast-paced global business.

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Although I am capable of doing both, I prefer to work in a group lately. 
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As an entry-level employee with short experience, there are many new skills to learn when working in a group. 
>>As an entry-level employee with a short work experience, there are many new skills to learn when working in a group.   
I learned sales skills to pitch ideas effectively to clients by shadowing other team members\' interactions. 
>>> correct   
Also, equipping data-driven analytics skills was impossible without reviewing other team members\' reports. 
>>> correct    
Additionally, I have realized that collaboration draws favorable results to clients since sharing unique ideas facilitates creativity. 
>>> correct   
Indeed, there are some issues that I need to contemplate by myself. 
>>> correct  
I believe working as a group is critical to outpace others within the fast-paced global business.
>>> correct   

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