Do you prefer working alone or in a group?`
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Hi Kim!
Thank you for sending this in. Please go over my corrections and just keep on practicing for your job interview! You can do it.
~Kelly^^
I prefer wroking in a group.
>> I prefer working in a group.
Before I entered the university. I pefered working or studying alone. because I can have my own way.
>> Before I entered the university, I preferred working or studying alone because I can do things in my own way.
But After I entered the university. I changed my mind. Because I had a lot of assignment that I need to do it as a team.
>> But after I entered the university, I changed my mind because I had a lot of group assignments.
So I and my team member designed together.
>> So, my team member and I designed our homework together.
sometimes we confronted a problem, then we had a conversation to solve the problem.
>> There were times that we confronted a problem, so we talked on how to solve it.
And we teached each other.
>> And we taught each other.
So finally we could finish our assignment and design the whole ship.
>> Finally, we finished our assignment and designed a whole ship.
that time I feeled a sense of accomplishment.
>> At that time, I felt a sense of accomplishment.
I realized if I did it alone, then I couldn\'t make it and I couldn\'t feel that feeling.
>> I realized that if I did it alone, I wouldn\'t be able to make it and could not experience that kind of feeling.
Now I know that If we work together then we can make better results.
>> Correct.
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