Do you prefer working alone or in a group?`

2016-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I prefer wroking in a group. Before I entered the university. I pefered working or studying alone. because I can have my own way. But After I entered the university. I changed my mind. Because I had a lot of assignment that I need to do it as a team. So I and my team member designed together. sometimes we confronted a problem, then we had a conversation to solve the problem. And we teached each other. So finally we could finish our assignment and design the whole ship. that time I feeled a sense of accomplishment. I realized if I did it alone, then I couldn't make it and I couldn't feel that feeling. Now I know that If we work together then we can make better results.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kim!

Thank you for sending this in. Please go over my corrections and just keep on practicing for your job interview! You can do it.

~Kelly^^

I prefer wroking in a group.

>> I prefer working in a group.
Before I entered the university. I pefered working or studying alone. 
because I can have my own way.

>> Before I entered the university, I preferred working or studying alone because I can do things in my own way.
But After I entered the university. I changed my mind. Because I had a lot of assignment that I need to do it as a team.

>> But after I entered the university, I changed my mind because I had a lot of group assignments.

So I and my team member designed together.

>> So, my team member and I designed our homework together.

sometimes we confronted a problem, then we had a conversation to solve the problem.

>> There were times that we confronted a problem, so we talked on how to solve it.

And we teached each other.

>> And we taught each other.
So finally we could finish our assignment and design the whole ship. 

>> Finally, we finished our assignment and designed a whole ship. 
that time I feeled a sense of accomplishment.

>> At that time, I felt a sense of accomplishment.

I realized if I did it alone, then I couldn\'t make it and I couldn\'t feel that feeling.

>> I realized that if I did it alone, I wouldn\'t be able to make it and could not experience that kind of feeling.
Now I know that If we work together then we can make better results.

>> Correct.

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