Do you prefer working at home because of Covid 19?

2020-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name], I like to work in the office. First time, a lot of person including me think that it seem to prefer working at home. but, actually, it prefer office working than home working. I think, home is for relexation and there is no additional system at home, so it is inconvenience for working. For example, we must connect the server computer for working. if I connect the company server computer, speedy is slow than office speedy, and we have no a breaking time at home, In the office, if it is a lunch time, we will stop to work and go to the food court. but there is no fixed time for something to eat or drink. So, I prefer a office work than a home working.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it very much. 

Dear [Name],

I like to work in the office. 
>> I like working in the office.

First time, a lot of person including me think that it seem to prefer working at home. 
>> At first, a lot of people including me think that it is better to work at home.

but, actually, it prefer office working than home working. 
>> But, I would prefer working in the office.

I think, home is for relexation and there is no additional system at home, so it is inconvenience for working. 
>> I think, home is for relaxation and there is no additional system at home so it is inconvenient to work.

For example, we must connect the server computer for working. if I connect the company server computer, speedy is slow than office speedy, 
>> For example, we must connect to the server to work. If I connect to the company server, the speed will be slower than when I\'m in the office.

and we have no a breaking time at home, 
>> We also don\'t have break time at home.

In the office, if it is a lunch time, we will stop to work and go to the food court.
>> In the office, if it is lunch time, we will stop working and proceed to the food court.

but there is no fixed time for something to eat or drink. So, I prefer a office work than a home working.
>> But, there is no fixed time for eating or drinking at home. 

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