Do you re-apply from the company you applied to before?
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It will depend on the degree of effort I have applied for before. If I truly did my best and failed to join the company, I would not apply for the company again. Because the failure is judged to be inconsistent with the company regardless of job or compensation.
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It will depend on the degree of effort I have applied for before.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> That would depend on the extent of effort I have applied before.
I truly did my best and failed to join the company, I would not apply for the company again.
>>> If I truly did my best and failed to join the company, I would not apply for the company again.
Because the failure is judged to be inconsistent with the company regardless of job or compensation.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Since failure has been judged inconsistently with the company despite the job or compensation.
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