Do you really need to have a college education to be successful? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. It\'s because if we get ready for have a job without college education, it is very unfavorable to pass it. So it is very hard to get any jobs and disappear to chance of success socially. This case is so sad. Therefore, we have to get college education for the most part.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Daisy.
Thank you for answering this question. It is sad to hear that you are defined by your college degree in your country.
I guess, it is really difficult to succeed if you don\'t have an accolade of academic achievements. :(
That is indeed sad.
Anyhow, I hope you are having a great day. See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry
Thank you for answering this question. It is sad to hear that you are defined by your college degree in your country.
I guess, it is really difficult to succeed if you don\'t have an accolade of academic achievements. :(
That is indeed sad.
Anyhow, I hope you are having a great day. See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry
>> Yes, we need a college education to be successful.
It\'s because if we get ready for have a job without college education, it is very unfavorable to pass it.
>> [Do you mean]: It\'s because if we apply for a job without a college degree, it is very unfavorable on our part to pass an application letter.
So it is very hard to get any jobs and disappear to chance of success socially.
>> So, it is very hard to get any jobs and our chances of succeeding disappear.
This case is so sad.
>> CORRECT!
Therefore, we have to get college education for the most part.
>> Therefore, we have to get a college education for the most part.
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