Do you recharge by being around other people or by spending time alone?
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Hi Jack!
I really like how you shared about your sociable personality, it shows your positive energy and love for connecting with others. It’s great that you know how spending time with people helps you recharge. I can really imagine you enjoying conversations, drinks, and golf with friends. You sound very warm and approachable. Excellent job expres[이름]g yourself so naturally!
~Teacher Cathy
I think my character is very sociable.
>>CORRECT
OR>> I think I’m a very sociable person.
And my major in university was sociology.
>>CORRECT
OR>> My major in university was sociology.
Then i really enjoy meeting people and having drinks, playing golf with them.
>>Then I really enjoy meeting people, having drinks, and playing golf with them.
After then, i always feel refreshed.
>>After that, I always feel refreshed.
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