Do you remember the first time you used a computer or the Internet? What did you think about it?
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. [이름]tina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
When I remember using a computer, internet. It\'s amazing and exciting to me.
>> When I remember the first time I used a computer and the internet, I think it was amazing and exciting for me.
Because that is first time for my life.
>> This is because that was the very first time I used it in my life.
and then I think comportable and useful using Internet searching.
>> Then I think, it\'s very comfortable and useful to use the internet for research.
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