Do you respect your country\'s president? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
No I don\'t because Korea president is close to Japan and It\'s a war crisis, but he not doing anything.
So I don\'t like my country president but Korean people like Moon Jae In.
강사 첨삭
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Do you respect your country\'s president? Explain your answer.
No I don\'t because Korea president is close to Japan and It\'s a war crisis, but he not doing anything.
>> No, I don\'t because Korea\'s president has a close relationship with Japan and there\'s a war crisis, but he does not do anything.
So I don\'t like my country president but Korean people like Moon Jae In.
>> So I don\'t like my country\'s president, but Korean people like Moon Jae In.
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