Do you see yourself being a vegetarian in the future? Why or why not?
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Do you see yourself being a vegetarian in the future? Why or why not?
I don\'t feel the need to be a veretarian.
l like meat and also vegetables.
I always at vegetables and meats in the furture.
It keeps a balanced food for heathly.
Veretarian has their own reason for that. I also couldn\'t find no reason to be a veretarian.
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Hi [이름]! People become vegetarians for many reasons, including health, religious convictions, concerns about animal welfare or the use of antibiotics and hormones in livestock, or a desire to eat in a way that avoids excessive use of environmental resources. Although there are some people who refuse like us hahaha. Thanks for sharing your opinion! :)
l like meat and also vegetables.
I always at vegetables and meats in the furture.
It keeps a balanced food for heathly.
Veretarian has their own reason for that.
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I don\'t feel the need to be a veretarian.
>>I don\'t feel the need to be a vegetarian.
l like meat and also vegetables.
>> CORRECT
I always at vegetables and meats in the furture.
>> I will always eat vegetables and meat in the future.
It keeps a balanced food for heathly.
>> I keep my diet balanced to be healthy.
Veretarian has their own reason for that.
>> Vegetarians have their own reason for that.
I also couldn\'t find no reason to be a veretarian.
>> I also couldn\'t find any reason to be a vegetarian.
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