Do you see yourself being a vegetarian in the future? Why or why not?
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No, I don\'t. I think human have to eat meat to keep their body good. Also I don\'t like vegetables. so I just only eat little of it. vegetables have a lot of materials to live healthy. but I think Eating only vegetables can\'t live entire life and Eating only meat can\'t live too. we have to eat both of them to live long time~
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Hi [이름]! People become vegetarians for many reasons, including health, religious convictions, concerns about animal welfare or the use of antibiotics and hormones in livestock, or a desire to eat in a way that avoids excessive use of environmental resources. Although there are some people who refuse like us hahaha. Thanks for sharing your opinion! :)
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No, I don\'t.
>> No, I don\'t think so.
I think human have to eat meat to keep their body good.
>> I think humans love to meat to keep their body healthy.
Also I don\'t like vegetables. so I just only eat little of it.
>> Also, I don\'t like eating vegetables so I only eat a few of it.
vegetables have a lot of materials to live healthy.
>> Vegetables have a lot of nutrients that can make us live longer.
but I think Eating only vegetables can\'t live entire life and Eating only meat can\'t live too.
>> But I think not eating any of the two can make us live longer.
we have to eat both of them to live long time~
>> We have to eat both in order to live longer.
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