Do you see yourself living abroad permanently?
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I don’t want to live abroad permanently, any countries. Because when i’ve lived in Japan for one year, i realized i couldn’t live alone abroad far away from my family. Although Experiencing new culture, making new friends etc was fun, but as times went by, i was getting feel lonely and miss my family so much. So i don’t have the confidence to live abroad forever.
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I don’t want to live abroad permanently, any countries.
>> I don\'t see myself living abroad permanently.
Because when i’ve lived in Japan for one year, i realized i couldn’t live alone abroad far away from my family.
>> I used to live in Japan for one year and I realized that I couldn\'t live alone in another country and away from my family.
Although Experiencing new culture, making new friends etc was fun, but as times went by, i was getting feel lonely and miss my family so much.
>> Although experiencing a new culture, making new friends, etc. was fun, as time went by, I was getting lonely and I missed my family so much.
So i don’t have the confidence to live abroad forever.
>> So, that\'s the reason why I am not that confident to live abroad permanently.
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