Do you shop online? Do you like it? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I dot shop online my self.
I dot like shop online my self my olders what I want to buy for me, because I\'m so young.
강사 첨삭
Good Thursday evening, Yale!
I\'m sending you back your corrected homework. Thanks as always for uploading it. Anyway, please take a look at the revisions made, such as alternative expressions or vocabulary. Also, mind your spelling of words, like \"myself\" and \"don\'t\".
Cheers,
Jean~~
Do you shop online? Do you like it? Why?
I dot shop online my self.
>> I don\'t shop online myself.
I dot like shop online my self my olders what I want to buy for me, because I\'m so young.
>> My elders buy what I want for me because I\'m too young to do it myself.
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