Do you show your ability and competency the moment you landed on a new job?

2021-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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No, I normally don’t. I just do my best and I don\'t overdo it to look better. My first few months after joining the company are enough time for others to have preconceptions about me, but I don\'t want to try to look good. Because to live up to their expectations, I think I have to work harder and then I may get out of the way. So I\'m not going to try to show off ability and competency but, work sincerely to show my genuine competencies.

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Hello there again [이름]! Thank you for the influence! Hahaha! I love reading your writings. Stay well.
~Aki :)
No, I normally don’t. 
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OR >>> I usually don\'t.
I just do my best and I don\'t overdo it to look better. 
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OR >>> I just give my best and not overdoing to look better.
My first few months after joining the company are enough time for others to have preconceptions about me, but I don\'t want to try to look good. 
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OR >>> The first few months of my employment are the adequate time for others to have an impression of me, but I don\'t try hard to impress them.
Because to live up to their expectations, I think I have to work harder and then I may get out of the way. 
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OR >>> Just to live up to their expectations. I guess I have to strive harder and I might get out of the way.
So I\'m not going to try to show off ability and competency but, work sincerely to show my genuine competencies
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OR >>>Thus, I don\'t display my ability and competency, rather I work sincerely to show my real skill.

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