Do you still believe in traditional medicines?

2022-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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There are things I believe in and things I don\'t. Example, I believe and acupuncture. When I got it for the first time, I felt better for my ankle. After that, I\'m still believe it. But I don\'t believe when I put soybean paste on a bee sting. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

I\'ve always wanted to try that but I never had the chance.

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There are things I believe in and things I don\'t.

>> There are things that I believe in and things that I don\'t.

Example, I believe and acupuncture.

>> Example, I believe in acupuncture.

When I got it for the first time, I felt better for my ankle.

>> When I got it for the first time, my ankle felt better.

After that, I\'m still believe it. But I don\'t believe when I put soybean paste on a bee sting. :)

>> After that, I believe that it works. On the other hand, I don\'t believe in putting soybean paste on a bee sting. :)

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