Do you still believe in traditional medicines? Why or why not?

2022-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I don\'t believe in traditional medicines anymore. First, there is no any scientific grounds in traditional medicines. They are just talking about their effects with no any grounds for it. Second, I\'ve never experienced the effects of traditional medicines. Because of these reasons, I don\'t believe it anymore and I will.

강사 첨삭

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We have the same opinion. :)

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I don\'t believe in traditional medicines anymore.

>> CORRECT

First, there is no any scientific grounds in traditional medicines.

>> First, there are no any scientific grounds in traditional medicines.

They are just talking about their effects with no any grounds for it.

>> CORRECT

Second, I\'ve never experienced the effects of traditional medicines.

>> CORRECT

Because of these reasons, I don\'t believe it anymore and I will.

>>Because of these reasons, I don\'t believe in it.

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