Do you still send cards or letters to your friends and family on special occasions?
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Hello Sylvia! Thank you for sending this in. Expressing ourselves to those people we care about is sometimes necessary.
- T. Beth
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I used to send paper cards and letters to people who ware closed with me on special accasions.
>>> I used to send paper cards and letters to people who are close to me on special occasions.
And I also used to get paper cards and letters from them.
>>> CORRECT.
Sometimes.I couldn`t send the letters after reading it again.Because I wrot about my emotions and feelings very detaily.
>>> sometimes, I couldn\'t send the letters after reading it again because I wrote about my emotions and feelings in detail.
that made me feel ashamed.
>>> CORRECT. (That made me feel ashamed.)
However.I send text messages to my family or friends these days.
>>> CORRECT. (However, I send text messages to my family or friends these days.)
I prefer sending text masages abruptly.
>>> I prefer sending abrupt text messages.
I just want to comvey my warm heart to them without hesitance.
>>> I just want to convey my warm heart to them without hesitation.
I could explain my mind more easily though the text messages.
>>> I could explain my mind more easily through the text messages.
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