Do you suffer from nightmares? Can you remember any specific nightmare?
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I suffered from nightmares when I was sleeping today. Actually, It\'s not real nightmare, but it was a thing that I don\'t want to suffer.
Because of Covid 19, my university is closed, so my roommate cannot come inside. Therefore, I\'m always nervous nowadays because I don\'t know when she come here.
So I\'m going to tell you today\'s nightmare. When I was sleeping, my new roommate came this room. But as you know, yesterday I didn\'t sleep very well, so sleeping was so precious for me. I didn\'t wake up and I kept sleeping as ignoring her. It was my mistake. Also, I late next class, I didn\'t attend it. When I got up, the time was over...
And then, I really woke up in real situation, and there was only 3 minutes to start a class... Fortunately, I didn\'t late, but that feelings made me not good until now. I think it\'s because yeseterday I didn\'t sleep well. It\'s real. It has happend today. After sumitting this homework, I will go to sleep right away.
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Hi, [이름] Su!
Thank you for doing your homework. It is still a good thing that this nightmare that you had is something you can easily forget. It\'s just scary because it can really happen in real life but hopefully not.
I suffered from nightmares when I was sleeping today.
>>I suffered from a nightmare when I slept today.
Actually, It\'s not real nightmare, but it was a thing that I don\'t want to suffer.
>>Actually, It\'s just similar to nightmares because it\'s something that I don\'t want to suffer.
Because of Covid 19, my university is closed,
Because of Covid 19, my university is closed,
>>CORRECT
so my roommate cannot come inside.
>>So my roommate cannot enter the dormitory.
Therefore, I\'m always nervous nowadays because I don\'t know when she come here.
>>Therefore, I\'m always nervous nowadays because I don\'t know when she will arrive.
So I\'m going to tell you today\'s nightmare.
So I\'m going to tell you today\'s nightmare.
>>CORRECT
When I was sleeping, my new roommate came this room.
>>While I was sleeping, my new roommate came.
But as you know, yesterday I didn\'t sleep very well, so sleeping was so precious for me.
>>CORRECT
I didn\'t wake up and I kept sleeping as ignoring her.
>>I didn\'t wake up and kept sleeping and just ignored her.
It was my mistake.
>>CORRECT
Also, I late next class, I didn\'t attend it.
>>Also, i was late for my next class. I wasn\'t able to attend it.
When I got up, the time was over...
>>When I got up, class was over.
And then, I really woke up in real situation, and there was only 3 minutes to start a class...
And then, I really woke up in real situation, and there was only 3 minutes to start a class...
>>Then I suddenly woke up from my dream and there was only 3 minutes left before the start of my class.
Fortunately, I didn\'t late, but that feelings made me not good until now.
>>Fortunately, I wasn\'t late but that dream gave me a bad feeling.
I think it\'s because yeseterday I didn\'t sleep well.
>>I think that\'s because I didn\'t sleep well yesterday.
It\'s real.
>>CORRECT
It has happend today.
>>It happened today.
After sumitting this homework, I will go to sleep right away.
>>After submitting this homework, I will go to sleep right away.
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