Do you support death penalty? Why?
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The Answer is Yes. Because Who punishment is death penalty meaning who killing some people. that people have a heavy punishment.
So I support death penalty.
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The Answer is Yes.
>>> The answer is a yes.
Because Who punishment is death penalty meaning who killing some people.
>>> It\'s because who ever is being punished with death penalty means that person had killed someone.
that people have a heavy punishment.
>>> That person should be given a heavy punishment.
So, I support death penalty.
So, I support death penalty.
>>> correct
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