Do you support this development or not? Sorry. I don't homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear. kris
Hi~ :D
Um.. I was totally shocked and couldn't say anything when I listened your parting. Though It was very short time that we known each other, I'm very very sad. Because I think that there was an act of providence. I hope to meet you again someday.:) Like when I suddenly became a rich, so I travel world and meet again most dramatically. hahaha.^^
It was kidding, kiki, I want you to be funny always. The laugh is good for everyone. And your laughter and voice is very charming. (I think kiki^^)
I really want you get a better job and happy life!!!
See you monday!
강사 첨삭
Hello dear!Your homework made me speechless too! kkk. Well, thank you [이름] for your wishes for me. You made me sad as well. But anyway, I\'m also hoping to meet you someday. I hope that you won\'t forget everything that we have discussed and practice more because it will enhance your English. Good luck and God bless to everything that you are planning. See you.Teacher KrisDear. kris>> Dear [Name],>> Dear [Name]!Hi~ :D>> Hi! Um.. I was totally shocked and couldn\'t say anything when I listened your parting. >>Um. I was totally shocked and could not say anything when I heard you are parting/leaving.Though It was very short time that we known each other, I\'m very very sad. >> I feel sad though it was a very short time that we have known each other.Because I think that there was an act of providence. >> I think that it was an act of providence.I hope to meet you again someday.:) >> CORRECTLike when I suddenly became a rich, so I travel world and meet again most dramatically. hahaha.^^ >> I hope that someday I will become rich and meet you again.It was kidding, kiki, I want you to be funny always. >> I was kidding. I just want you to be funny always.The laugh is good for everyone. >> CORRECTAnd your laughter and voice is very charming. (I think kiki^^)>> Your voice and laughter are very charming.I really want you get a better job and happy life!!!>> I really want you to get a better job and experience a happy life.See you monday!>> See you on Monday.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.