Do you take vitamins? Do they really help people, or do they just have a placebo effect?

2015-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Taking vitamins often makes us feel like we are doing the right thing for our health. We think it will help us stay healthy. Even experts are split on the effect of vitamins and the dispute are still continuing. A number of research studies indicate that supplements are not always beneficial. Worse yet, supplementing with certain vitamins and minerals may cause harm. For some people, vitamins may offer important health benefits, however, healthy people who take extra vitamins as an "insurance policy" for poor eating habits might actually increase their risk of health problems. Many people assume that if a small amount of something is good, then more would be even better. But that formula doesn't always work when it comes to vitamins. Simply that for people who are in good health, a vitamin and mineral supplement may not be necessary.It is important to remember that dietary supplements cannot take the place of a healthy and well-balanced diet. Vitamins do not offer a magical solution.

강사 첨삭

Great composition, Sir [이름].

Happy Friday!

I hope that you are doing great today.
What activities did you do today?

I am excited to hear your stories in class.

Yes, I agree with you.
We should still maintain a healthy lifestyle even if we take vitamins.

Find time to exercise, eat healthy food and have enough sleep,

Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina


Taking vitamins often makes us feel like we are doing the right thing for our health.

>> CORRECT

We think it will help us stay healthy.

>> CORRECT

Even experts are split on the effect of vitamins and the dispute are still continuing. 

>> CORRECT

A number of research studies indicate that supplements are not always beneficial.

>> CORRECT

Worse yet, supplementing with certain vitamins and minerals may cause harm.

>> CORRECT

For some people, vitamins may offer important health benefits, however, healthy people who take extra vitamins as an \"insurance policy\" for poor eating habits might actually increase their risk of health problems.

>> CORRECT

Many people assume that if a small amount of something is good, then more would be even better.

>> CORRECT

But that formula doesn\'t always work when it comes to vitamins.

>> CORRECT

Simply that for people who are in good health, a vitamin and mineral supplement may not be necessary.

>> CORRECT

It is important to remember that dietary supplements cannot take the place of a healthy and well-balanced diet.

>> CORRECT

Vitamins do not offer a magical solution.

>> CORRECT

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