Do you tell people what you want for Christmas or do you prefer it to be a surprise?
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I usually tell people what I want. Because I want to get present that I want to receive. If my parents or my friends give me a present that I don’t want to get, I feel burden. So when I give a present to others, I usually tell the things that I want to receive to others first. But Surely, I also like surprise gift, If the gift is my best present!
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I usually tell people what I want.
>>CORRECT
Because I want to get present that I want to receive.
>>Because I want to get the present that I want to receive.
If my parents or my friends give me a present that I don’t want to get, I feel burden.
>>If my parents or my friends will give me a present that I don\'t want to get I will feel sad.
So when I give a present to others, I usually tell the things that I want to receive to others first.
>>CORRECT
But Surely, I also like surprise gift, If the gift is my best present!
>>But surely, I also like surprise gifts if the gift is my best present!
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