Do you think a four day work week would be a good idea?

2016-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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It would be wonderful if we have a four day work week. However, I’m somewhat doubtful whether the change will lead all of us to have a better and leisurely life. I still remember how I was envious of advanced countries that have already been implementing a 5-day work week when we had to work 6 days a week. The current 5-day work week has started not long time ago, about 19 years ago. When we started the 5-day work week system, I was so delighted for a while. However soon after the implementation, I found myself just killing time without doing any productive things. These days, many employees suffer from Monday blues more than before even though they get rest for longer time. When I worked for 6 days a week, I didn’t have hard time returning to work after taking rest on Sunday. The longer we take off, the more difficult to return to our daily routines. Simply imagine how hard it is for us to go back to work and get on track after a long holiday or vacation.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]!

How are you?
Thank you for another wonderful composition.

I hope that you will have a great night ahead.

It\'s good for you that you are not having a difficult time going back to work after a six days of working.

Most people hate Mondays.

I sometimes feel the same way after a long holiday. Hihihi.

See you.
Teacher Nina


It would be wonderful if we have a four day work week.

>> correct

However, I’m somewhat doubtful whether the change will lead all of us to have a better and leisurely life.

>> correct

I still remember how I was envious of advanced countries that have already been implementing a 5-day work week when we had to work 6 days a week.

>> correct 

The current 5-day work week has started not long time ago, about 19 years ago.

>> correct

When we started the 5-day work week system, I was so delighted for a while.

>> correct

However soon after the implementation, I found myself just killing time without doing any productive things.

>> correct

These days, many employees suffer from Monday blues more than before even though they get rest for longer time.

>> correct

When I worked for 6 days a week, I didn’t have hard time returning to work after taking rest on Sunday.

>> correct

>> Better: When I worked for 6 days a week, I didn’t have hard time returning to work after taking a rest on Sunday.

The longer we take off, the more difficult to return to our daily routines.

>> correct

Simply imagine how hard it is for us to go back to work and get on track after a long holiday or vacation.

>> correct

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