Do you think a four day work week would be a good idea?
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Thank you for another wonderful composition.
I hope that you will have a great night ahead.
It\'s good for you that you are not having a difficult time going back to work after a six days of working.
Most people hate Mondays.
I sometimes feel the same way after a long holiday. Hihihi.
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Teacher Nina
It would be wonderful if we have a four day work week.
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However, I’m somewhat doubtful whether the change will lead all of us to have a better and leisurely life.
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I still remember how I was envious of advanced countries that have already been implementing a 5-day work week when we had to work 6 days a week.
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The current 5-day work week has started not long time ago, about 19 years ago.
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When we started the 5-day work week system, I was so delighted for a while.
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However soon after the implementation, I found myself just killing time without doing any productive things.
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These days, many employees suffer from Monday blues more than before even though they get rest for longer time.
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When I worked for 6 days a week, I didn’t have hard time returning to work after taking rest on Sunday.
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>> Better: When I worked for 6 days a week, I didn’t have hard time returning to work after taking a rest on Sunday.
The longer we take off, the more difficult to return to our daily routines.
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Simply imagine how hard it is for us to go back to work and get on track after a long holiday or vacation.
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