Do you think a mother is a better "stay at home parent" than a father? Why or why not?

2014-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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If we had to choose between the two options – who should stay at home, a farther or a mother – I would stand on the side of the latter. In general, a mother is better than a farther in raising his/her kids such as feeding, caring, and nurturing because women, in nature, were born to be a mother. A mother will go to all ends to keep her young from harm's way. This is true for all animals where the maternal instinct is believed to be hard-wired to the brain. Practically, a farther will face a lot of challenges especially when raising his daughter because he’ll reach a point that he cannot be a good counselor for her daughter’s delicate sexual issues that she might face as growing up. However, the most important thing is the quality of time you spend with your child at home regardless of whom is a stay at home parent. Moreover, as living expenses are high these days, most household are have difficulties to make both ends meet so that both parents have to work without a choice.

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Hello Sir [이름]! Yahoo! It\'s already Thursday! And tomorrow is holiday. ^^ I know that you are really waiting for it. Hihihihi! I agree with you but I think some men can already handle it too. Spending time with kids is really important. It is a way for us to know them better and to assist them with their needs. Someone told me that being a parent never stops even if his/ her child is already married. We should always show our love to our family. Thanks for an inspiring essay. Teacher Nina   If we had to choose between the two options – who should stay at home, a farther or a mother – I would stand on the side of the latter. >> Correct ( spelling check: father ^^) In general, a mother is better than a farther in raising his/her kids such as feeding, caring, and nurturing because women, in nature, were born to be a mother. >> Correct >> OR: In general, a mother is better than a farther in raising his/her kids such as feeding, caring, and nurturing.  It is because women, in nature, were born to be a mother. A mother will go to all ends to keep her young from harm\'s way. >> Correct >> OR: A mother will do everything on her end to keep her young away from harm. This is true for all animals where the maternal instinct is believed to be hard-wired to the brain. >> Correct Practically, a farther will face a lot of challenges especially when raising his daughter because he’ll reach a point that he cannot be a good counselor for her daughter’s delicate sexual issues that she might face as growing up. >> Practically, a father will face a lot of challenges especially when raising his daughter, because he\'ll reach a point that he cannot be a good counselor for her daughter\'s delicate sexual issues that she might face when growing up. >> OR: >> Practically, a father will face a lot of challenges especially when raising his daughter. It is because he\'ll reach a point that he cannot be a good counselor for her daughter\'s delicate sexual issues, that she might face as she grows older. However, the most important thing is the quality of time you spend with your child at home regardless of whom is a stay at home parent. >> Correct >> OR: However, the most important thing is the quality of time you spend with your child regardless of stays at home. Moreover, as living expenses are high these days, most household are have difficulties to make both ends meet so that both parents have to work without a choice. >> Moreover, as living expenses are high these days, most household are having difficulties to make both ends meet so, both parents have to work without a choice.

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