Do you think a mother should stay at home and take care of her baby after giving birth?
학생이 쓴 원문
I strongly believe that a mother should stay at home and take care of her baby after giving birth.
It is the time for concentrating on her baby.
As a baby grows up, a mother should learn about her baby by caring herself.
Even though a baby cannot remember this moment, caring for her baby is very important for mother.
She is able to know her kid\'s favorites or characteristics.
Also, she can build up the relationship with her child from a young age.
This will be very helpful to be familiar with each other in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hi Chloe!
Here are the corrections.
I strongly believe that a mother should stay at home and take care of her baby after giving birth. It is the time for concentrating on her baby.
>>Correct!
As a baby grows up, a mother should learn about her baby by caring herself.
>>As a baby grows up, a mother should learn about her baby by taking care of her.
Even though a baby cannot remember this moment, caring for her baby is very important for mother. She is able to know her kid\'s favorites or characteristics.
>>Even though a baby cannot remember this moment, caring for her is very important for a mother. She is able to know her kid\'s favorites or characteristics.
Also, she can build up the relationship with her child from a young age. This will be very helpful to be familiar with each other in the future.
>>Correct!
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