Do you think action movies influence people to commit crimes?
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I don\'t think people commit crimes. I think action movies don\'t have much influence on crime. But for kids, i think it have much influence on a growing season. If kids often watch action movies, it will affect their brains.
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Good morning [이름]!
I like the way you expand your thoughts. I agree that people don\'t commit crimes due to action movies that they see, however, for growing kids, TV or movies have a great influence on their personalities.
Enjoy the day!
T. Aki~
I don\'t think people commit crimes
>>> CORRECT!
I think action movies don\'t have much influence on crime.
>>> CORRECT!
But for kids, i think it have much influence on a growing season.
>>> But for kids, I think it has much influence on a growing season.
If kids often watch action movies, it will affect their brains.
>>> CORRECT!
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