Do you think advertising influences you? How?
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Obviously I agree.
A advertising uses many visual and sound stimulation to affect to customer.
A advertising hasn\'t enough time.
So it\'s shows image without narrative to customer.
It is visual stimulation.
It\'s similar to a movie\'s visual shock.
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Obviously I agree.
>> Correct.
OR:
>> I totally agree.
A advertising uses many visual and sound stimulation to affect to customer.
>> An advertising uses many visual and sound stimulation to attract customers.
A advertising hasn\'t enough time.
>> An advertising has limited commercial air time
So it\'s shows image without narrative to customer.
>> So it shows images without narration.
It is visual stimulation.
>> Correct.
OR:
>> That is \"visual stimulation\".
It\'s similar to a movie\'s visual shock.
>> It\'s similar to a movie\'s visual effects.
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