Do you think all children should be taught loyalty and patriotism to their country? Why?
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I think that children should be taught loyalty and patriotism. If they learn loyalty and patriotism, they can love their country more. Some kids ask \"Why do I love my country?\" If they learn it, they will be able to answer it.
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I think that children should be taught loyalty and patriotism.
>> OR: I believe that children should be taught loyalty and patriotism.
If they learn loyalty and patriotism, they can love their country more. Some kids ask, \"Why do I love my country?\"
If they learn it, they will be able to answer it.
>> correct
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