Do you think animals should be used for an experiment? Why or Why not?
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People who conduct certain experiments should come up with alternatives, if just in case the government will be imposing a certain law about animal testing. You are really impressive, keep it up!
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As a hospital worker, I think animals should be used for an experiment.
>>> Correct!
Because we can not apply for a new medication or skills to patients without evidence.
>>> Because we can not apply a new medication or skills to patients without evidences.
Animal experimentation helps proving an effect of new medication and techniques.
>>> Animal experimentations help in proving the effects of new medications and techniques.
I have learned the history that Japanese solder\'s used our people for experiment when they colonized Korea.
>>> I have learned from the history that Japanese soldiers used our people for experiments when they colonized Korea.
What a cruel things are!!
>>> How cruel things are!
Some people think that it is not the best way to discover new things by using animals while others say it\'s vital to help developing medicines for humans.
>>> Correct!
Our department experimented how radiation works to the mice according to the daily dose.
>>> Correct!
After that we always hold a memorial services for animals.
>>> After that, we always hold memorial services for animals.
>>> After some experiments, the animals will die.
Humans did a best things as possible as they can.
>>> Humans did the best thing as possible as they can.
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