Do you think animals should have their own rights too?
학생이 쓴 원문
Even though, animal can’t talk or think logically like human, they have their own right. They can express what they want, they bark or make some sound. They can not take their own right, people should make their right.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Happy Wednesday! Thank you for making your homework again today despite your already busy schedule. I agree with your ideas today. I personally love animals and I am also fighting for their rights in my community. I hope more people will do the same. See you later in class! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>Even though animals can\'t talk or think logically like humans, they have their own right.
2. They can express what they want, they bark or make some sound.
>>CORRECT!
3. They can not take their own right, people should make their right.
>>They cannot make their own rights, people should help them make their rights.
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