Do you think anyone can become a celebrity? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I do anyone can become a celebrity these days because digital platforms like YouTube and TikTok make it possible for anyone to gain fame and create opportunities easily.
강사 첨삭
Hello Yu Li!
Thank you for your great work! Your idea is clear and well explained. Just a small tip: don’t forget to include helper verbs like “do think” to make the sentence complete. Keep going—you’re doing well!
~~Teacher Kate
I do anyone can become a celebrity these days because digital platforms like YouTube and TikTok make it possible for anyone to gain fame and create opportunities easily.
>>I do think anyone can become a celebrity these days because digital platforms like YouTube and TikTok make it possible for anyone to gain fame and create opportunities easily.
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