Do you think anyone can become an actor? Why or why not?
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Do you think anyone can become an actor? Why or why not?
I think anyone can\'t become an actor.
Actor is person that reenact someone\'s imaginary life, so they must have ability to make a character that express certain emotion in various environments.
I think talent that empathy to certain character is born to be innate, or involves great deal of effort.
Almost every people\'s personality isn\'t change well, they live the world as it is.
In contrast, actors live another person\'s life although according to script and short periods.
Thank you for reading even though poor writing. :)
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Hi! ~~
Actor is person that reenact someone\'s imaginary life, so they must have ability to make a character that express certain emotion in various environments.
I think talent that empathy to certain character is born to be innate, or involves great deal of effort.
Almost every people\'s personality isn\'t change well, they live the world as it is.
In contrast, actors live another person\'s life although according to script and short periods.
I\'d love to read and send some corrections. ^^
I enjoyed reading this.
I think you are very good at expressing what you want to say!
Please continue sending compositions so that you can practice your writing skills. ^^
~t. Ally
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I think anyone can\'t become an actor.
>> I don\'t think anyone can simply become an actor.
Actor is person that reenact someone\'s imaginary life, so they must have ability to make a character that express certain emotion in various environments.
>> An actor is someone who reenacts someone\'s imaginary life, so they must have the ability to make a character that can express certain emotions in various environments.
I think talent that empathy to certain character is born to be innate, or involves great deal of effort.
>> I think that the talent of empathizing with a certain character is innate, or it involves a great deal of practice and effort.
Almost every people\'s personality isn\'t change well, they live the world as it is.
>> Almost every person\'s personality is fixed, they live in this world as they are.
In contrast, actors live another person\'s life although according to script and short periods.
>> In contrast, actors live another person\'s life, although it\'s according to scripts and short periods of time.
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