Do you think arranged marriages are a good idea? Why or why not?
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I think that arranged marriages is a good way for people who really want to marry.
>>> II think that arranged marriages are a good way for people who really want to marry.
Thesedays I am worred about where I can meet man.
>>> These days I am worried about where I can meet the man.
Since I graduated my university, I didn\'t have opportunities to meet men. Some people meet in workplaces, club etc.
>>> Since I graduated in a university, I didn\'t have opportunities to meet men. Some people meet in workplaces, club etc.
It is the best way to find a boyfriend ourselves.
>>> CORRECT
However, people who don\'t have time and composure need arranged marriages and blind dates.
>>> CORRECT
Through these things, some people can be goaled in getting marry.
>>> Through these things, some people can be pushed to get married.
Therefore, I agree that arranged marriages are a good idea.
>>> CORRECT
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