Do you think art is important in life? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think art is important in life because art is very up imagination.
But I don\'t like art because I don\'t drawing.
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Hi Jimmy!
Here\'s your second revised composition for today. Below is the corrected one.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Do you think art is important in life? Why?
I think art is important in life because art is very up imagination.
>>> I think art is important in life because it inspires imagination.
>>>OR: Art plays an important role in life because it sparks creativity and imagination.
But I don\'t like art because I don\'t drawing.
>>> But I don’t like art because I don’t know how to draw.
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