Do you think athletes earn enough money, not enough money or too much money?

2019-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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In my book, the athletes in Korea don\'t earn enough money on average. Only the some of the famous athletes can make sufficient money to keep go on their carrier. Even though the popular sportspersons suffer the insufficiency of support fund. I can give you an example. The most favorite Korean figure skater Yu-na Kim had a hard time because of the insufficient funding. She didn\'t get an ample income, so her mother made for her stage costume by herself and Yu-na Kim should shoot a lot of advertisement to live. I think the situations are different in another countries. Some world famous soccer players earn huge amount of money. In my opinion, we don\'t need to be that stage, but we should support our sportsman.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^y^


Happy Wednesday :)

I appreciate your efforts...\\m/...

Keep it up!


T. Lainey <\",)))><


In my book, the athletes in Korea don\'t earn enough money on average.

>>> In my book, the athletes in Korea don\'t earn enough money but on average.


 Only the some of the famous athletes can make sufficient money to keep go on their carrier.

>>> Only famous athletes make sufficient money to keep during their career.


 Even though the popular sportspersons suffer the insufficiency of support fund.

>>> Even though the popular sports person suffers insufficiency of support fund.


 I can give you an example.

>>> correct


The most favorite Korean figure skater Yu-na Kim had a hard time because of the insufficient funding.

>>> The most favorite Korean figure skater Yu-na had a hard time because of insufficient funding.


 She didn\'t get an ample income, so her mother made for her stage costume by herself and Yu-na Kim should shoot a lot of advertisement to live.

>>> She didn\'t get an ample amount of income so her mother made her own costume and she had to do advertisement for her income.


 I think the situations are different in another countries.

>>> correct


 Some world famous soccer players earn huge amount of money.

>>> correct


In my opinion, we don\'t need to be that stage, but we should support our sportsman.

>>> In my opinion, we don\'t need to be that staged, but we should support our sportsman.

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