Do you think athletes earn enough money, not enough money or too much money?
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In my book, the athletes in Korea don\'t earn enough money on average.
>>> In my book, the athletes in Korea don\'t earn enough money but on average.
Only the some of the famous athletes can make sufficient money to keep go on their carrier.
>>> Only famous athletes make sufficient money to keep during their career.
Even though the popular sportspersons suffer the insufficiency of support fund.
>>> Even though the popular sports person suffers insufficiency of support fund.
I can give you an example.
>>> correct
The most favorite Korean figure skater Yu-na Kim had a hard time because of the insufficient funding.
>>> The most favorite Korean figure skater Yu-na had a hard time because of insufficient funding.
She didn\'t get an ample income, so her mother made for her stage costume by herself and Yu-na Kim should shoot a lot of advertisement to live.
>>> She didn\'t get an ample amount of income so her mother made her own costume and she had to do advertisement for her income.
I think the situations are different in another countries.
>>> correct
Some world famous soccer players earn huge amount of money.
>>> correct
In my opinion, we don\'t need to be that stage, but we should support our sportsman.
>>> In my opinion, we don\'t need to be that staged, but we should support our sportsman.
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