Do you think athletes have the best life?
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If the athletes won 1st in the Olympic, they would have the best life in my personally opinion. As far as you know, it\'s a kind of hard to get it because it\'s the most difficult competition. There are players who are the best from their country around the world. On top of that, it comes with the injury for the tough physical fight. It could drive them to not walk and to not do usual life.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
If the athletes won 1st in the Olympic, they would have the best life in my personally opinion.
>> If the athletes won 1st in the Olympics, they would have the best life in my personal opinion.
As far as you know, it\'s a kind of hard to get it because it\'s the most difficult competition.
>> CORRECT!There are players who are the best from their country around the world.
>> CORRECT!On top of that, it comes with the injury for the tough physical fight.
>> CORRECT!It could drive them to not walk and to not do usual life.
>> It could drive them to not walk and to not go on with their life.
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