Do you think being a professional dancer would be a good job?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think so because the professional dancers teach dancer and dancer makes many people feel happy so it is good job.
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Do you think being a professional dancer would be a good job?
I think so because the professional dancers teach dancer and dancer makes many people feel happy so it is good job.
>> I believe so because professional dancers teach amateur or other dancers and make many people happy so it\'s a good job.
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