Do you think being slim equals beautiful? Why or why not?
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Do you think being slim equals beautiful? Why or why not?
I disagree that slim equals beautiful.
But fat bady looks like not healthy bertter than slim body. I think good helthy body is beautiful.
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Exactly, Soolyn! You are on point! I hope you are always in shape!-Faith-
Do you think being slim equals beautiful? Why or why not?>> CORRECT
I disagree that slim equals beautiful.
>> CORRECT
But fat bady looks like not healthy bertter than slim body.
But fat bady looks like not healthy bertter than slim body.
>> But, fat body does not look healthy, which is worse than a slim body.
I think good helthy body is beautiful.
>> I think a good and healthy body is beautiful.
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